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Can you hold my hand forever?

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I think
      the love in my
                                   -h e a r t-

is too hard to bear;
                             my soul is gone.




I'll thank you for having me in your life.



                                                (Can you hold my hand forever?)




You said you had to go
                                   , but now I feel a hole ,
                                                                         and in that very hole

                  was my love for you.

                                                              I said I like you
                                 and you just look at me
            like I'm nothing.
This is my first poem.
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RiverstarofEarthclan's avatar
You know what this kind of reminded me just a little bit or John and Violet just not the last part